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Jazmine,
This is a really interesting topic to explore, but it didn’t appear that you did that within the context of social psychology as much you did that within the context of cultural psychology. As I noted in a comment in your paper, those two fields are certainly related, but I definitely needed to see more social psychological concepts.
Your writing is quite clear and straightforward so that was helpful, but you repeated the same content in various sections of your paper. I’m not sure why.
You also had some great peer-reviewed sources, but you had some in-text citations missing. Sometimes, I simply wasn’t sure what source you were referring to, so that’s an error to correct for the future as well.
Sharon
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