Write a final draft of a Visual analysis paper on a painting called “Lot and His Daughters” created in 1550 by the School of Fontainebleau. I have already completed the first draft of the paper, I need help revising. I have attached and typed out the directions to write the final draft. Make sure to follow ALL directions please. No use of CHAT GPT or any AI software. Thank you. I have also attached the last draft of my paper that you will be revising.
Here is the feedback I received on my last paper. Can you please incorporate it into the revised version?: “This essay is basically strong, and has some good visual analysis. Your comparisons are also well-chosen. But right now your argument is still purely visual – you haven’t done the required research to add historical and art historical context. To improve the essay, do more research about the School of Fontainebleau and its art historical context – look up that term in the database Oxford Art Online and Smarthistory, for instance. Also look carefully at the guidelines for using footnotes – they aren’t for illustrations, but for information you find in the recommended sources. We look forward to seeing your final revised version”
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