Title: “Passion for Medicine: A Journey of Reflection and Growth” Introduction: As I stood in the operating room, observing the intricate movements of the surgeons and the beeping machines surrounding the patient, I knew that this was where I belonged

My paper is very above the 5300 character deadline. Please help me write an eye-catching introduction, make the essay more specific to my passion for medicine, more reflection for the stories (main takeaways) and cut it down to the required word count. I included the essay itself and the feedback I received from others but am not sure how to incorporate that feedback onto the essay. Thank you so much!!!