Title: “The Power of Personal Experience: A Comparative Analysis of Heschel’s “Salvation” and Hughes’ “Salvation”

rewrite my reasearch paper taking into account my teachers sugestions. 
“Good start. There is no comma in the date on the top your first page. Also, your first paragraph is confusing, because you are talking about Abraham Heschel’s “Salvation,” instead of Langston Hughes’ “Salvation.” Plus your thesis is confusing. I would rewrite your introduction. You are including outside sources throughout your draft. You need to state your points and ideas, then you use the supporting sources to back up your own ideas instead of just summarizing the sources throughout your paper.”