“Revised Assignment 1: Improving Writing Skills for Assignment 2 Preparation” Introduction: The purpose of this assignment is to revise and improve upon Assignment 1 in order to enhance writing skills for the preparation of Assignment 2. The feedback from

For my Assignment 2, you need to follow all the details in the instruction PDF!!!! 
My Assignment 1 score is very low and needs a lot of revision. The teacher has marked the areas that need to be revised in red in the text. You need to improve assignment 1 according to the requirements of the Russian teacher before you can write my assignment 2 well.
The elements that you address under each of the headings can form sub-headings. The structure should be like I said in the PDF. You must read my Assignment 1 carefully to complete this assignment 2. This is because all content is based on the first one.