Thesis statement: “The use of technology in education has both positive and negative effects on student learning and development.” Topic sentences: Yes, the topic sentences clearly stem from the thesis statement. Each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the thesis statement

Let’s look at an example of a research paper written by a previous student. I  have attached the paper below. 
After reading the paper, please answer the following questions:
What was the student’s thesis statement? Copy and paste it here. 
Did the topic sentences clearly stem from the thesis statement? Can you briefly identify the focus of each paragraph in your own words?
Did the author utilize evidence well? Why or why not? 
Identify and label the parts of the student’s counterargument paragraph. You can copy and paste the individual parts with these labels:
The lead in
The counterargument 
The development of the counterargument
The transition
The rebuttal 
The development of the rebuttal 
What is something you particularly liked about this essay or feel like the author did particularly well? Why? 
Is there anything you think that the author could have improved on? What was it? Why?