Title: “Showing” vs. “Telling” in Writing: Transforming Bland Sentences into Vivid Descriptions “The dog’s tail wagged eagerly as he bounded towards the door, eagerly anticipating their daily walk together.” “S

Take a look at the following lines of text that are all “telling ” rather than “showing.”
cpoy and paste them into new word document. “Telling ” sentences:
1. The dog was happy to go on a walk.
2. Sally loved running. 3. It was a big storm.
4. The hall was really crowded. 5. Michael was really good at his job.
In your document, bellow each sentence, write a new version of the sentence where the information is “shown” through description and action. Feel free to add details to make the new version come alive.
12pt in size
Times new roman font
1-inch margins
double spaced

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