Category: Application writing

  • “Adapting to Change: A Journey of Growth and Resilience”

    Prompt: Share an essay on any topic of your choice. Tell us your story and show us who you are.
    Use these prompT/ideas provided to write a college application essay, that illustrated growth around the theme that I am adaptable. Be specific in personal examples, narratives, and use imagery and rhetorical devices to make an impact on the reader. I have the main points, just need someone to bring it all together, write it well, and make it flow. It should be near 600 words.
    Below is just a general guide. I have attached the guide specifc to me as a PDF.
    Deciding on Your Essay Type:
    Key Event: This essay picks an important life event that occurred in the student’s life and gives insight to why the event was so transformative.
    Metaphorical: This essay picks an important object in the student’s life and relates his/her experiences and transformation of maturity to the object.
    Timeline: This essay picks out multiple key events in the student’s life that connect to one overall theme/event.
    Picking a Value to Highlight:
    To make your essay focused, you need to choose one value you want to highlight about yourself throughout the essay. Is it your value of community? Family? Autonomy? Compassion? Teamwork? Equality? There are a lot of values to choose from, and extensive lists can be found with a simple online search.
    Creating an Outline:
    Your personal statement should include:
    A depiction of your character before a pivotal event.
    The event itself and its immediate consequences.
    How the event transformed you.
    Your future direction, informed by this transformation.
    Structure your essay with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, ensuring each section supports the overarching theme and value you’ve chosen to highlight.
    Crafting an Intriguing Introduction: 
    You need an interesting hook. This, however, is more simple than it seems. When you brainstorm your hook, ask yourself, “If someone read just my hook, would they be curious to read more?”. A hook may just be a simple statement, a quotation, a vivid description of the scenery, etc. (pro tip: AVOID USING A POPULAR QUOTE OR TRUTH AS YOUR HOOK)
    Describing the Main Event: 
    As you begin your body paragraphs, you want to descriptively lay out the main event that resulted in your character transformation. This is where you want to use extremely vivid sentences. In describing the main event, it is good to include the immediate effects of the consequence. Not all consequences have to be negative. (pro tip: AVOID SIMPLY STATING WHAT HAPPENED).
    Illustrating Growth and Future Aspirations:  
    This is the absolute most important part of your personal statement. You want to describe how you changed as a person as a result of the main event. Do not just say, “I became more passionate about service”, but show that you became more passionate about service by describing the homeless shelters you volunteered for or the elderly couple you helped get groceries for every weekend. Remember that you need to focus this part on only YOU!
    Conclusion:
    Reiterate how the event has shaped you today and how you’ll leverage the lessons learned as you move forward. This is a MUST. It’s your chance to leave a lasting impression on the admissions committee, highlighting your resilience, growth, and potential for future success.
    Step By Step Essay Outline
    Hook: [Write your hook]
    Introduction: [Write what your introduction will be about]
    Body Paragraphs: 
    [Write what your body paragraph will be about]
    [Note which one(s) it will focus on: Early experiences, Turning Points, Challenges and Overcoming Diversity, Epiphanies and Lessons Learned]
    Conclusion:
    [Explain how you will incorporate the introduction/body paragraphs of your essay]
    [Explain how you will show confidence with moving forward to the future]

  • Professional Reference Letter for University at Buffalo Criminology M.S. Program To Whom It May Concern, It is my pleasure to write this letter of recommendation for [Your Name], who has been working as a Dance Teacher/Choreographer at

    I need a professional reference letter to get into  University at Buffalo’s Criminology M.S. program. 
    I’ve been working as a Dance Teacher/Choreographer for the past two years 07/2022-present) at Steeltoes Dance Studio. 
    I need you to pretend to be my Director of Operations Donna Fusco.   

  • “Versatility in Questioning: Exploring Different Writing Styles” Introduction: As a writer, being able to ask different types of questions is a crucial skill. It allows for a deeper understanding and analysis of a topic, and it also helps to

    In position to perform all kinds of questions such has essay writings,research and analytitic questions.Able to write down properly essays questions using different writing styles such as Apa,Mla,Harvard and Chicago styles.Below are few examples of my work have done so far.

  • “Fighting Against Adversity: A Mother’s Journey from Homelessness to Academic Success”

    My special circumstance is I ended up homeless with my 3 year old son and living house to house. Depression got the best of me and my grades begin to drop 

  • “The Path to My Passion: A Personal Statement for Graduate School”

    I need this paper to get me into graduate school it needs to be PERFECT! This is something I am very passionate about and something I really want.

  • “Exploring Hoarding in Senior Citizens: Insights from an Internship with Meals On Wheels”

    This is to relate my internship experience with the non-profit organization Meals On Wheels and the clients we have that are hoarders. I can take care of the parts relating to my internship. I am just looking for information on hoarding and the psychological aspects of it, possibly the prevalence rates in senior citizens as well. How does hoarding start? What are possible solutions to minimize or cure hoarding?

  • “Hoarders in the Senior Community: Exploring the Psychological Factors and Solutions through an Internship with Meals On Wheels”

    This is to relate my internship experience with the non-profit organization Meals On Wheels and the clients we have that are hoarders. I can take of the parts relating to my internship. I am just looking for information on hoarding and the psychological aspects of it, possibly the prevalence rates in senior citizens as well. How does hoarding start? What are possible solutions to minimize or cure hoarding?

  • “Overcoming Adversity: My Journey to Becoming a First-Generation College Student and Future Doctor”

    College admission essay that includes exceptional hardships, challenges, or opportunities that have shaped or impacted my abilities or academic credentials, personal responsibilities, exceptional achievements or talents, educational goals, or ways in which I might contribute to an institution committed to creating a diverse learning environment.
    The hardships I’ve gone through that can be mentioned are domestic violence, unstable living conditions that require a lot of moving, financial instability, and health problems. I’m also a person of color and a first-generation college student. My goal is to become a medical doctor who can help people that has gone through difficult situations like me.

  • “The Bold Pencil’s Billion-Dollar Test Order: A Tribute to the Purple Butterfly and its Impact on Society”

    TEST_ORDER Сміливий олівець мільярд застосовуватися що-небудь порода актриса присвятити ліловий звільнення метелик триста вперед плід головка функція натиснути століття свіжий міра занадто зрозумілий єдиний діставати розвинений функція означати отже зарплата головка скинути солома перебивати польовий зображати господь зловити художній банда хліб порода гідність знищення лапа засунути дрімати більше від’їзд вчора монета.

  • “Reflecting on Personal Experiences: Lessons Learned and Growth Gained”

    English 101
    Writing Assignment #1 Guide
    Reflective Essays:
    A Reflective essay will relate to personal events or experiences and how they have impacted or
    changed the writer.
    A reflective writing assignment should analyse the experience, its meaning, and lessons that can be
    learned from it.
    It requires you to open up about your thoughts and emotions to uncover your mindset, personality,
    traits of character, and background.
    The reflective essay should include a description of the experience/literature piece as well as
    explanations of your thoughts, feelings, and reactions.
    Reflections are very personal and subjective, but they must maintain a formal tone and should be
    well organized.
    Reflective essay ideas:
     An experience you will never forget.
     The moment you overcame a fear.
     The most difficult choice you had to make.
     A time your beliefs were challenged.
     A time something changed your life.
     The happiest moment, or most frightening moment, of your life so far.
     Ways you think you, or people, can make the world a better place.
     A time you felt lost.
     An introspective look at your choices, or a time you made the wrong choice.
     A moment in your life you would like to relive.
    Reflective Essay Outline
    Introduction:
    Should begin with a short preview of what you will be writing about.
    The introduction should also include a hook to engage the readers and pique interest.
    Body of the essay:
    This part of the essays should take a chronological approach of the events which happened.
    Surmise the experiences and how they impacted you as well as the lessons that have been learned.
    Reflect on the impact the experience has had on your life and the changes you have made because
    of it.
    Include points about why your views or reasoning has changed.
    English 101
    Conclusion:
    Wrap up your ideas and demonstrate a sense of how you’ve developed as a result of the experience.
    Describe your feelings, mention discoveries, and plans for the future.